D. T. Kane reads chapter 13 of his epic fantasy fiction novel, The Acktus Trials, and discusses the chapter with his audience.
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Characters in this Chapter:
Baztian (Baz): Our main character
Rox: Deliritous’s Harbour (bodyguard)
Deliritous: Baz’s master, heir to Torchsire Library
Below are my notes/script for the episode, not a verbatim transcription.
PERSONAL UPDATE
Welcome back to D. T. Kane’s Epic Fantasy Book Club. Today is March 23, 2022 as I record this, Episode 11.
On the personal side of things, not too much to report. I appreciate the kind words from those of you who reached out about my home repair woes. They’ve finally dried everything out, and my wife and I were able to actually sleep in our bedroom again for the first time in over a week, so that was a relief. Air mattresses are not a recipe for good sleep! And actually, this turned out to be a bit of a blessing, because when they removed one wall, the contractors discovered an exhaust pipe for our furnace wasn’t properly sealed, which could have led to gas leaks, so really glad that was caught! Now we’re just waiting for the walls to get put back up, which I’m sure will be another fun around of contractors coming in and out.
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ANAYLIS CH. 13
The Plan–In the Interest of Keeping Deliritous Safe
So we left off last week with Baz offering to complete the Trials for Deliritous, who has a broken leg. Incidentally, did any of you catch that Baz quipped about Deliritous breaking his leg back in chapter 7? Just a bit of innocent foreshadowing there!
Why is Baz willing to make such a deal after being so down on having to come on this journey at all? Well, obviously he wants something in exchange, and that’s for Deliritous to keep secret that Baz can Read. And as Baz says, as much as Deliritous is horrified by Baz’s ability, Baz has hit on the one thing that frightens Deliritous more than a Cuss: letting his father down. Baz actually says he feels a bit bad about capitalizing on that. “Grungy” is the term he uses. Baz, after all, has a family member he wouldn’t want to let down in his brother, and certainly Baz wouldn’t like someone taking advantage of that. Interesting how Baz and Deliritous are sort of serving as foils to one another even though they’re in such different positions.
So, what are the features of the plan? Well, there’s a few interesting ones.
- Baz gets to use Rox. Interesting point here, that Deliritous has the right to “transfer” Rox’s oath. Sort of a reminder that Rox is kind of property too, even though we haven’t necessarily thought of him as such to this point. Interesting too that Rox says he “dislikes the idea of leaving [Deliritous’s] side.” Maybe an indication that Rox views his responsibility for Deliritous as more than just a simple duty.
- They need to find a safe location to leave Deliritous while Baz goes off to complete the Trials. We see from how much of a hard time Deliritous has riding that he can’t go on. There’s a town nearby and the plan is to leave him there. But remember, no one can know Deliritous isn’t the one completing the Trials. Imagine the shame if it came out a Speaker completed the Trials for him! So how are they going to handle that?
- Well, Baz and Deliritous will switch places! This is a funny sequence, I think, where both Baz and Deliritous are lamenting having to pretend to be the other. More evidence of how they foil one another, we get Baz thinking it will be simple to impersonate Deliritous, then Deliritous says aloud how it won’t be hard to imitate Baz.
- Baz: just act clueless and treat everyone he met as if they were below him
- Deliritous: Just need to glower at everything and act as if I know more than I ought to.
- But Deliritous doesn’t have a brand. Interesting, Deliritous notes this “progressive” movement in the city of Fortune, where some Readers are no longer branding their Speakers. So, maybe not all Readers treat their Speakers as poorly as they do in Erstwhile? That’ll be more relevant in the next book, but file that away. For now, Baz notes that the people in Hamlet are going to know a Speaker ought to be branded because Erstwhile sends Speakers and Readers there every year to serve the townsfolk. So what does he do? He convinces Rox it’s in Deliritous’s best interest to have a wound on his head where his brand conceivably could have been.
- Hole in Baz’s plan–he’ll have to give up his only leverage to enforce the promise: The Book he finds at Tome. But one problem at a time. As Baz notes, “an unlikely number of things would need to go right before Baz needed to expend any energy at all worrying over that.”
Hamlet: I’m looking for a hat, good shopkeeper.
So we arrive in Hamlet, Deliritous pouting since Baz convinced Rox to slice up his forehead. It’s a bit of a dump, right? Dilapidated buildings with a few muddy paths for streets. Sounds like it was a bustling hub once, back when Tome was still the country’s capital. But no longer.
Baz stops at a shop and Rox goes in with him (remember, they’re pretending Baz is a Reader, so he’s got to have his Harbour with him). The shopkeeper, though, isn’t nearly as impressed with Baz as Baz figured, and Baz feels like a fool, expecting special treatment for acting like a Reader. “Fair shopkeeper, it is I, Deliritous Torchsire, Reader of Erstwhile, come to grace your shop with my presence.” We learn the shopkeeper had recently been swindled by another Reader, so he’s a bit salty.
And now, the big reveal that I promised last week! What is it? The hat! Finally, we see why I’m wearing the hat. Baz is getting himself one, because he needs to conceal the brand on his forehead, plus he’s always wanted one and he’s taking advantage of the situation. And the shopkeeper does have one: “It was dark brown leather, creased and well-worn with a wide brim.” Here it is!
The shopkeeper tries to rip Baz off, seeing how eager he is. Rox catches him in the lie (Baz doesn’t have much of a concept of money), but Baz tells Rox to give the shopkeeper the sum he asked for anyway, recompence for his previous treatment. Interestingly, Rox agrees. He sees truth in what Baz is doing–it matches up with Rox’s code.
And this act of kindness turns out to be helpful, right? The shopkeeper wasn’t going to say anything, but after Baz gives him the extra coin, he reveals that Marla and Hellar were in the shop, asking around about a lost Torchsire Speaker. The shopkeeper gives a skeptical glance outside, where Deliritous is waiting, supposedly a Speaker. Marla has also told the shopkeeper that she’ll be back in a month, asking again for information. And she was offering good coin for information.
Baz briefly considers whether they need to kill the shopkeeper to keep him quiet. But notice how Rox actually dissuades him from doing so. Again, we see that Rox may actually me the most moral of our trio of main characters here! So instead, Baz asks the shopkeeper how much Marla was offering for the information. Obviously, he’s going to try to outbid her. But does anyone see the issue here? The impact on their plan? Well, tune in next week to find out!
Miscellaneous
Deliritous’s regret over Tax
Stories of men going mad from using shadow spells. Is that what the voices were, going mad? Baz had, after all, agreed to help Deliritous!
CONCLUSION
Homework: We’ll read Chapters 14 and 15 next week. Plans will change, relationships will grow! And then our characters run into yet another problem. What could it be?
Listener Question:
Quest: Any thoughts on what my inspiration for Rox was? He’s a bit of a blend of characters from relatively well-known fantasy works. Send me your thoughts and we’ll discuss them next week.
Until next time, this has been D. T. Kane’s Epic Fantasy Book Club.
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